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the 13th hour by twisted-wind the 13th hour by twisted-wind
the haunted rising: [link]

...the storm raged outside the manor, while Melanie drove the two vampire guests to their room, only the tik tok of the old clock in the hallway echoed between the ancient walls.

Mickey felt a strange feeling, as he hold Mina into his embrace
"it's all so... ancient and strange..." he muttered and look at the girl with candelabra "Miss Ravenswood, there's a question I wanted to ask to you from the dinner.."

Melanie turn to the Count and smiled "yes, tell me"

"I've seen in this manor it seems all ready... for something.."
Mina at that poin grab Mickey's cloth, pointing at a coffee "oh m-my god.. what's happened here Melanie.."

a little upset from that vision, Mickey swallowed and continue his ask "Melanie... what's going on here.. and why you're dressed as bride?"

at first Melanie just stopped from walking, and a little sigh left her lips, Mina felt a shiver down her spine "I'm waiting..." the bride answer simply, like twas something normal "I'm waiting for my groom..." at that point she smiled maliciously.

Suddently the clock start to chime a disturbing sound, as the needle reached the 13th hour, for Mickey and Mina's horror the coffin in front of them began to tremble, to creack and the lid was unhinged from two hands of a dead into the coffin, moaning creepy "l.. let me out of here.. l-lemme..."

Mina was scared as Mickey, then the doors into the hallway began to slam and knock, inhuman cries echoed from the doors into the hears of the two scared vampires, Mickey hold Mina tight with him and frantically turn around his head searching Melanie

"what the hell is going on Mel.." his worlds stopped when Mina tug his cloth "Mickey! look! in the hallway!"

Mickey follow Mina's scared gaze and for his horror he seen Melanie in the middle of a endless hallway, singing a sad melody
"Melanie!! where are you doing?!? please come back!"

Melanie continue to sing, walking into the endless corridor.. and the darkness swallowed her white figure

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Silversmicee Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Omg im scared :(
oh my! :omg: That looks spooky! :fear: But cool! :D
Nice has Melanie betrayed them what happens next? Grim grinning ghosts come out to socialize!
GabiSaKuRa Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOVW THIS!!!! <3<3<3
NinjaSkillz99 Sep 7, 2012  Student General Artist
Hey Twisted-Wind, is Melanie, by any chance, related to Emily from your comic 'The Count Mickey Dragul'?
blackrodse Sep 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
omg shes back !!!!!
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:iconfeger23: fantastico!!! lo adoro :heart: ma il terzo fumetto del conte mickey dragul?
eheh spero di farlo, si
una storia che dura solo una nottata, quella che i due vampiri passano nella Phantom Manor
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