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the 13th hour by twisted-wind the 13th hour by twisted-wind
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...the storm raged outside the manor, while Melanie drove the two vampire guests to their room, only the tik tok of the old clock in the hallway echoed between the ancient walls.

Mickey felt a strange feeling, as he hold Mina into his embrace
"it's all so... ancient and strange..." he muttered and look at the girl with candelabra "Miss Ravenswood, there's a question I wanted to ask to you from the dinner.."

Melanie turn to the Count and smiled "yes, tell me"

"I've seen in this manor it seems all ready... for something.."
Mina at that poin grab Mickey's cloth, pointing at a coffee "oh m-my god.. what's happened here Melanie.."

a little upset from that vision, Mickey swallowed and continue his ask "Melanie... what's going on here.. and why you're dressed as bride?"

at first Melanie just stopped from walking, and a little sigh left her lips, Mina felt a shiver down her spine "I'm waiting..." the bride answer simply, like twas something normal "I'm waiting for my groom..." at that point she smiled maliciously.

Suddently the clock start to chime a disturbing sound, as the needle reached the 13th hour, for Mickey and Mina's horror the coffin in front of them began to tremble, to creack and the lid was unhinged from two hands of a dead into the coffin, moaning creepy "l.. let me out of here.. l-lemme..."

Mina was scared as Mickey, then the doors into the hallway began to slam and knock, inhuman cries echoed from the doors into the hears of the two scared vampires, Mickey hold Mina tight with him and frantically turn around his head searching Melanie

"what the hell is going on Mel.." his worlds stopped when Mina tug his cloth "Mickey! look! in the hallway!"

Mickey follow Mina's scared gaze and for his horror he seen Melanie in the middle of a endless hallway, singing a sad melody
"Melanie!! where are you doing?!? please come back!"

Melanie continue to sing, walking into the endless corridor.. and the darkness swallowed her white figure

"MELANIEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!"
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:iconsilversmicee:
Silversmicee Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Omg im scared :(
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warriormoonnight Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
oh my! :omg: That looks spooky! :fear: But cool! :D
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BlueRoseKelly Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012
Nice has Melanie betrayed them what happens next? Grim grinning ghosts come out to socialize!
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GabiSaKuRa Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOVW THIS!!!! <3<3<3
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NinjaSkillz99 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Student General Artist
Hey Twisted-Wind, is Melanie, by any chance, related to Emily from your comic 'The Count Mickey Dragul'?
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blackrodse Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
omg shes back !!!!!
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LaylaAlvedo Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012
The Phantom!
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feger23 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012
inquietante......ma fantastico!!! lo adoro :heart: ma il terzo fumetto del conte mickey dragul?
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twisted-wind Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012
eheh spero di farlo, si
una storia che dura solo una nottata, quella che i due vampiri passano nella Phantom Manor
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feger23 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012
non vedo l'ora :la: :la: :la:
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lukosv Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ah fond memories of the haunted house ride....when I was a kid it actually scared me. XD
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HalfMadCharacter Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Student General Artist
oh, im sure everythings fine...

:D :D :D
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:iconshadywinters:
ShadyWinters Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Frightning! Yeah!
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Raubritter Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Grim grim ghosts
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Shraznar Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Student General Artist
You n Zenox's wrks r becoming english. cool
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xHelloBeautifulx Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012
Wow, epicness! This is quite spooky but beautiful at the same time. Awesome work. :iconihappyloveitplz:
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TopHatBigPencil Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my gosh! (0.0) I would be freaking out like (>.<) "NO! PLEASE LET ME LIVE! I'M TOO YOUNG TO DIE OF A FREAKING HEART ATTACK!" This sounds so exiting and terrifying, I hope they get through this okay.
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Furgemancs Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
woaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!! Soo creepy and amazing! can't wait to hear more of the Hanuted Manor:D
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RaltheCommentator Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012
O.O That ride scares the crap out of me, but it sounds more compelling to see Mickey and Minnie venture it. It certainly looks more promising than a ride that had such a harsh ending. :'(
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Disneyfan84 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012   Photographer
OMG I love you so much for this!! Ravenswood Manor is my favorite story out of the Haunted Mansion tales! I hope to one day visit it. I love how Count Mickey is added into the story! I LOVE YOU!!! :tighthug:
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MermaidNinja Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012
More please!
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Heights503 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012
Is Hatbox ghost in this universe?
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TaRtOoN-Man94 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012
13 hour...you mean 1 in the afternoon? :?
(That was a tasteless joke an I appologise)
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dnxlightangel Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012
HOLY GUACAMOLE! Scary stuff :iconshaplz: and LOVE THIS HAHAHAHA XD just love this so much so hauntingly beautiful XD
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twisted-wind Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012
ahah thank you dear :glomp:
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dnxlightangel Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012
Your welcome :heart::heart: :iconaawplz: :heart::heart:
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TheIcedWolf Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012
creepy and i love it

disney needs more darker animation like nightmare before christmas, better than the gunk they are spewing out these days XD
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Drock625 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012
Okay good picture, but the story. There were some parts I just couldn't understand. I had to read the same sentence at least 5 times in order to understand what's happening. Now I know that English is not your first language, but if you ever need any help with it, please be advised that I am here and I am willing to help you. I'm already helping Zenox with his Translated story. But I'll need you to trust me. Do I have that trust?
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Mickeyiscool77 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012
Woooooooooooow creeeeeepy :d
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Barricade379 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012
Who's in the coffin?
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:icontheicedwolf:
TheIcedWolf Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012
Bosko
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BillyBones0704 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012
Who do you think? X)
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EricTheWhitelion Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012
creepy but cool
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Skellington13Rose Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012
Oh my God I am in love with this. I really do hope you do a comic of this because it would be a wonderfully chilling story. Excellent work. :D
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princessofDisney27 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012
omg this is awesome and haunting having chills down my spine for ravenswood manor XD hahah dude i hope this could be like the third comic for count mickey dragul I am a huge phantom manor fan :3 i love knowing about the mystery that mickey and his family would solve even scared to death by the 13th hour XDDDDD
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09alih Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haunted Mansion references galore! Always nice to see badass Dragul too!
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Zenox-furry-man Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
meooooow pauroso !!!*trema forte*
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