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please save me by twisted-wind please save me by twisted-wind
music: [link]

The situation was desperate, not only Mina started to feel sick and her conditions were worsening rapidly, but now from the manor they could't escape anymore, as something or someone forced the two vampires into that cursed manor.

Mickey ran for the corridors in search of the bride Melanie, the Count called her name for the corridors until... a strange sound stopped his run, it seemed to be the weak music from a carillon [link]

the Count followed that strange, sad melody throught corridors and doors, until he reach a dark room, the situation scared and embarassed him a little, and he finally found Melanie.
She was in front of a huge mirror, weeping and singing a sad melody

"Melanie! finally I found you, please you must help m-" for Mickey's shock the bride suddenly turned toward the Count, and a light of a thunderbolt illuminated for a short moment the bride's room, revealing a skeleton where Melanie stood

"you're... a ghost too?!?" terrified the Count recoiled, but the bride was already in front of him, almost pinning him at the wall
"he's here... I don't want to follow him..." the bride blabbed in tears and her trembling fingers touch Mickey's cheeks, frightening more him "please Count Dragul... please help me!! you must help me!" she almost yelled into his face, scared and trembling.
The Count can't say nothing at that moment, he was too shocked for the sight
"Mickey... please.." she whispered, begging him, and her lips slowly meeted Mickey's icy, trembling lips.

At that moment Mickey snapped out of the shock and bitting his lips he pushed away the bride, growling
"stay away from me!" he sneered and rushed out of the room, leaving the scared and crying bride behind him
"We can't wait anymore! With Zamfire me and Mina will escape from this place!"
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:iconsilversmicee:
Silversmicee Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
OOOOmggggg save herr MIckyyyy
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:iconjoshvirgin:
joshvirgin Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013
Poor Melanie. Why couldn't she be saved? Why? :(
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:iconblinded-djinn:
Blinded-Djinn Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Wow.. this is beautiful i,ve always loved how you do your art with such colour wish i was good as you :)
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:iconromancefreak:
romancefreak Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh man!! I can't wait for this comic to come!!!
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cat-girl14 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012
SHE DID WHAT!!!!!!!!???????? OMG!!!!!!!! i bet mickey didn't see that coming! i sure didn't...
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:iconcat-girl14:
cat-girl14 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012
nice!!!!
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:iconloonataniataushamay:
LoonataniaTaushaMay Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Way 2 go Mickey
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:iconsampea:
sampea Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2012
a vampire afraid of a ghost? :confused:
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:iconspookvdopera:
SpookvdOpera Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yesterday I was riding Phantom Manor in Disneyland Paris. I came back home today I see this I was like.....:gasp: Beautyfull!
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DarkStart001 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
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TopHatBigPencil Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh man! If Mina would of seen that...! :no: Mickey would have been in trouble. :plotting: Heh. (6,6)
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:iconbluerosekelly:
BlueRoseKelly Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012
This is going to be interesting if you decide to make this a comic.
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:iconpennyadodumuss:
Pennyadodumuss Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The ghost bride actually reminds me of Phantom manor Tale. [link]

Wait, It is Based on Phantom Manor!
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:iconshrekrulez:
SHREKRULEZ Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
Poor Mina Mouse. I mean Minnie.
It's very sad that her condition just gotten worse than before.
In characterization from storytelling, sometimes you could make a choice.
Like killing characters in comic books and making the fans upset.
I hope Mina won't die. GREAT JOB, BTW!
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:iconoldschoolcartoons:
OldschoolCartoons Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Student Filmographer
nice story
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:iconelvishdork:
Elvishdork Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
More plz
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:iconfeger23:
feger23 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
mmh, inquietante...davvero inquietante! :fear: ma comunque bellissimo!!
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SickDogs Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012

No idea whats going on, but I like it.
I think.
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:iconcimorine90:
Cimorine90 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
woah! what the heck is going on?!?!?! I'm so lost.
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:iconproject-game:
Project-GAME Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist
this picture is fantastic!
I love the way you drew the bride..she looks great!
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:iconhalfmadcharacter:
HalfMadCharacter Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Student General Artist
This lookz so cool.
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:iconblackrose140792:
BlackRose140792 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
Spero che Mickey abbia un piano B.

Altri mente fottuto a bestia XDDD
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:iconralthecommentator:
RaltheCommentator Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
Where do their babies, Emily and Zurtian fit in? Or was this before they were born?
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:icondigi-angel:
Digi-Angel Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow,let the ''Run from the bride'' games begain
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warriormoonnight Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
Poor Melanie. :sniff: what's going to happen to her? :worry: what if she's in danger. :fear:

Melanie is so beautiful. (she does reminds me of someone i saw from Disney's "The Little Mermaid")
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:iconbarricade379:
Barricade379 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
Are ghost brides your favorite type of ghosts?
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Drock625 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
Your English is good but still needs a little work.
some of these are not that big a deal but, I'll go ahead and talk to you about it.

"The situation was desperate, not only Mina started to feel sick and her conditions were worsening rapidly, but now from the manor they could't escape anymore"
now for this one you are again using too many words. Try to make it shorter instead of using so many words to describe one thing. For example:
"The situation was desperate, not only did Mina started to feel sick, but they couldn't escape from the manor." See what I did? I made it shorter so that we can get to the point.

"The Count can't say nothing at that moment, he was too shocked for the sight" after "The Count was so shocked, he couldn't say anything."

"she almost yelled into his face, scared and trembling." after "trembling with fear, she nearly yelled at his face" or "She nearly yelled at his face as she was trembling with fear"

"At that moment Mickey snapped out of the shock and bitting his lips he pushed away the bride" don't you mean "biting" or "bit"? After: "Mickey snapped out of it and bit his lips as he pushed the bride away." Repeating things. "Mickey snapped out of the shock" you don't need to say "the shock" we already know he's in shock.

"leaving the scared and crying bride behind him" again, you are repeating things. The reader already knows that the bride is scared and crying because you've told them that on the fifth paragraph. So you don't need to say it again. That's one thing a writer doesn't do, repeat.

"With Zamfire me and Mina will escape from this place!" If you want to include the destrier that's fine, so write it like this "With Zamfire, Mina and I will escape." But including the horse is also not necessary, no matter how I come up with it, it still doesn't make any sense to include the destrier in it. The most simplest and quickest way is to say "Mina and I will escape from this wretched place". Oh and one more thing, you never say "me" when you're including yourself in the picture. It is always "I". "Mina and I" or "My mother and I".

I'm sorry if this offends you, if it does, please forgive me.
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twisted-wind Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
XD no worry, I'm glad you want to help me with english :)
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:iconfurgemancs:
Furgemancs Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
woaaaaah finally a new drabble from Phantom Manor! :excited: The story is getting better and more interesting as we goes forward X3 Bravo my sweet one :clap:
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:iconlunachannekojin:
LunaChannekojin Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012
...Mickey needs an adult.
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:iconpennyadodumuss:
Pennyadodumuss Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
He is an adult.
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Anayo-s Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012
I like how your style combines Mickey Mouse characters in a Gothic style. (I'm not sure if I should officially call it Gothic, maybe just macabre.) At any rate I'm not usually super enthusiastic about either of them individually but you manage to combine them in a way that makes them really interesting, IMO more so than the original canon. ^_^
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princessofDisney27 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012
i love how mickeys expersion is like "oh shit! oh shit! oh shit! oh shit! shes getting closer!!!" XDD its priceless!
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twisted-wind Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
XDXDXD thank you so much sweety :hug:
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princessofDisney27 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
your welcome XD
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:iconskellington13rose:
Skellington13Rose Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012
This is intense and beautiful, I love it! :D
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:iconjebest:
jebest Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Student General Artist
I really need to read the stories made if only they were translated into English.
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09alih Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow... the bride is so beautiful, and the look on Mickey's face is incredible. Everything is just so sad, eerie, beautiful, and just perfect. I salute you once again for your incredible work!
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twisted-wind Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
awwwww thank you very much :hug:
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:icon09alih:
09alih Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
My pleasure :)
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RoguishBard Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Eerie, but sad at the same time. Is there an entire story I can read?
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:iconalythewolf369:
Alythewolf369 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012
is rude to kiss someone thats married but I wonder what's really going on
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:iconfangirlofthenorth:
fangirlofthenorth Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Love how you draw Melanie Ravenwood (and of couse everyone else XD)!!
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:iconmickeyiscool77:
Mickeyiscool77 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012
Woow intense :o
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:iconmangafroangel101:
MangaFroAngel101 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Student Artist
Cool.
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Nayhed Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh no run Mickey ruuuunnn!
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:iconckstudios:
CKstudios Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
O dear...
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GabiSaKuRa Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMG!! I just got chills!! Loves this pic~~!!
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FireshockerBill Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Epic. That's so awesome! :)
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